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這是我高二時在學校英文訓練課程的作品,分享給大家...^^
題目:Tell me WHY???
說明:Please give 3 reason on why you like special person or thing?
我的寫作:
I like Gillian Chung for 3 reasons.The first one is that she sings very well.Her voice can touch the world.Another reason is that her movies are very good.With her movies,my life becomes meaningful.Also,her acting touches my heart every time I see her play.The very reason I like her is because she is very beautiful.She is the most beautiful girl in the world.Her beauty,her talent in performance and her song deeply attract me.I like her very very much.
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